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Overall I think me feedback was reasonable, there were some things in the feedback which I do disagree with such as the fact that I made lots of spelling errors, and on word there were none, and also that my page numbers do not make sense, when to me they do. To improve my work, I will follow the feedback which I have been given back so that I will have the greatest chance at succeeding in my magazine, the feedback has also given me suggestions as to what I need to do to make it look more aesthetically pleasing.